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Monday, 14 December 2015

2015 Reflections

Here is some photos from this year.



                                                                  Netball

First aid course
Going to camp
Those were the memories I will remember in my heart.
I will miss being in flox class.

Friday, 4 December 2015

In the rain forest - Interesting facts

In flox class we have been working on our self guided reading task. We had to work on one of our self guided learning and when we have finished we put the link on the box or the work we were working on. I worked on my interesting facts. Here is my work.

Wednesday, 2 December 2015

Flox Class - Kiwi Christmas Calender

In Flox class we been creating a advert calender for christmas. In about a few weeks we are going to be achieving these things Nice to each other and keeping safe. Here is mine.

Thursday, 26 November 2015

WALT use precise nouns to add detail to our reader

This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop diary to get some food grocery. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll barbie and a soft toy Teddy bear. After that we went to the shop mall to buy some clothes, I got two new items jewelry and a pair of shoes slippers. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block slushy. Lucky me!

Cyber smart: consequences map


This is my cyber smart consequences map.

Wednesday, 11 November 2015

HPS Student Led Toolkit Reflection

 This is my Student led toolkit presentation that I worked on. It was complicated for me to fill out the last slide because I didn't know which three I should choose to learn about. 





Tuesday, 3 November 2015

Rugby World Cup 4 Sentence Recount

WALT recount an event in just 4 sentences.

Yesterday we wrote a recount about the rugby world cup, because the All Blacks won!

Thursday, 15 October 2015

Positive blog commenting


Today we have been learning about how to write a positive blog comments with Mr Hopkins. Here is my presentation with some tips for blog commenting. Can you find out who's blog I commented on?

Friday, 25 September 2015

End of term reflection


This term we have been learning about the past and why it is important. In Flox Class we have focused a lot on art and the way art is used to tell stories.

This is my word cloud that shows my ideas about art and how it tells stories.

Tuesday, 15 September 2015

Te Reo Māori Conversation

WALT have a conversation in te reo Māori.




In Flox Class we have been learning to have a conversation in Māori. We used i Movie to make our te reo Māori conversation. Have a look at this one. We used te reo Māori to create our movies. In Flox class we are still learning Māori and pronounce them. I hope you enjoy the video.
Please leave a comment.

Ka ki te ano!
Petulisa

Friday, 21 August 2015

Camp Movie

This week we have been making movies trailers using iMovie. This is a trailer that I made on the iPad.

Wednesday, 29 July 2015

Camp

I am most excited about learning how to do archery in camp. I am most nervous about sleeping in camp without any of my family but I still have my cousin with me when we are going to camp. I think camp will be surprising and exciting when we do some activities.

Tuesday, 28 July 2015

Student conferences


This is my student conferences goal.

Wednesday, 22 July 2015

Term 3

This term I am looking forward going to camp and do some activities there. I'm also looking forward to learning new things this term. Reading is mostly what I am looking forward to learning this term.

Tuesday, 21 July 2015

My writing learning goal

This term in writing i am going to be learning my two goals

They are:

Join some ideas using conjunctions such as: when, while, after, since, until, if, because, although, that.
Improve my writing so that it is more enjoyable/informative for the reader.

I will know I have achieved these goals when I can show evidence of these in my writing.

Wednesday, 1 July 2015

BEST DAY EVER!!!!

This is when we went on the bus to Eden Park
We where all so excited to see our surprise, But first we have to go over some things. It was fun though. 
This is a picture of my little brother and my friend.
This is the dressing room where we went in first.

Wednesday, 10 June 2015

PT 2.6.15 Information Report Writing WK

We are learning to write an information report about a topic related tooo space.

By Friday 5 June you need to have written and edited your information report on a topic related to space so that it is ready to be published.

Here are some ideas to write
  • Jupiter
  • Astronauts
  • Earth    
  • The Moon
  • Eclipses
  • Stars

My topic is:
 Uranus


You need to attend one workshop with the teacher on an area that you feel you need help with for your writing. Here is the timetable where you will make your bookings. There is space for seven people in each workshop so book in quickly to make sure there is space!

Start researching and plan your writing here: (remember to write notes in your plan). Click here to see an exemplar of a plan.

Introduction:
Grey planet
4 planets away from Earth
Main idea:
Uranus has a rings around it.
More detail:
Uranus is known as a giant ice planet
More detail:
Uranus has mantle(Water,ammonia,methane ices)
Main idea:

Uranus is the 8th planet in our solar system.
More detail:
Uranus has a ariel shadow.
More detail:
Uranus is the least dense planet to Saturn.
Main idea:
Uranus spins the opposite direction to Earth.
More detail:
Uranus is 2871 million km from the Sun.
More detail:
Uranus can be a crescent planet like Earth Moon.


Success Criteria for writing. Click here to see an exemplar of an information report about Mars.

Level 3
Student Targets:
Yes!
Audience and Purpose
  • Identify my audience and purpose for writing.

Content/Ideas
  • Write clearly and include all important information.

  • Add factual detail to expand my ideas.

Structure: including punctuation and grammar
  • Use different sentence starters.

  • Join some ideas using conjunctions such as: when, while, after, since, until, if, because, although, that

  • Organise my ideas into paragraphs and sequence my ideas so that my writing flows.

  • Use subheadings for each new paragraph to tell the reader what it is about

  • Check that I am writing in the present tense (for example: the sun is a ball of fire; the stars are shooting through the sky)

  • Use a range of punctuation correctly.    (.,?!)

Editing
  • Identify and correct most spelling errors.

  • Improve my writing so that it is more enjoyable/informative for the reader.



Start your writing here:

Introduction
Grey planet, 4 planets away from Earth.

Facts about Uranus
Uranus has rings around it. Some people thinks that Uranus got its ring during a crash. Uranus was officially discovered by Sir William Herschel in 1781.
Uranus is known as a giant ice planet  Uranus has mantle( Water, ammonia, methane ices).
Uranus is the 8th planet in our solar system.

Which way Uranus spins.
Uranus spins the opposite to Earth.

Miles
Uranus is 2871 km away from the Sun.
Uranus is 2,869,000,000 km from the Sun.

Details about Uranus
Uranus has a ariel shadow.
Uranus is at least the less dense planet to saturn.
Uranus can be a crescent planet like the Moon.
When you look at Uranus may look like it's blue when you look at it from a telescope but it is actually it is grey and  light brown. Uranus is the only planet with a name sure to elicit giggles. The proper way to say the name is YOOR--un--nus. It was almost named "Georgium Sidus" to honor an English king, but tradition prevailed and in 1850 the planet got its frequently mispronounced mythological name.

Temperature
-224゜C

3rd biggest
Uranus is the 3rd biggest planet in the solar system.

Unlike other planets Uranus spins on its side. It believed that a large object smashed into it. The crash was so powerful it changed the direction it spin.
The name Uranus is over 2,500 years old. Uranus has 27 moons.

Uranus colour is like a wool that has been used as a sock, quilt, scarf and a gloves. It might look different to the other people.

Thursday, 7 May 2015

My name in New Zealand sign

This week we have been learning some sign language in Flox class  This is the link  to my name in NZSL.


Can you sign your name?

Monday, 4 May 2015

Interesting Facts

Hi i'm Petulisa and this is an audio recording about me!    https://drive.google.com/open?

id=0BzmqzzZJwBa8UHBuY3NxVzBtRTg&authuser=0.    I am really excited about doing voice recording
on someone's blog.

Wednesday, 18 March 2015

All about me


This is my all about me and it my first time on my blog.