WALT use precise nouns to add detail to our reader

This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop diary to get some food grocery. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll barbie and a soft toy Teddy bear. After that we went to the shop mall to buy some clothes, I got two new items jewelry and a pair of shoes slippers. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block slushy. Lucky me!